Micron Pigma Ink in small Moleskine sketchbook
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This morning on BART I saw this lovely man as soon as I got on and purposely picked a seat one row past him. I was lucky that nobody sat between us until halfway through the ride. My ride to work is only 13 minutes and he slept the whole way, only changing his left arm slightly. When people sat in the seat in front of me I had to keep scrunching around, trying look over their shoulders or in the aisle–but then my viewpoint changed so that wasn’t too helpful. The guy sitting next to me reading didn’t pay any attention to all my gyrating, nor did anyone else.
One thing I noticed about my process was that before I started drawing I sort of drew the picture mentally first, moving the pen above the paper, picturing how I’d place the image. Then I was ready to start drawing but had this rebellious moment where I decided to start with the hand that was closest to me (which doesn’t appear in the drawing because it was the only thing he moved) even though I had a feeling it was not the “right” place to start. It worked out ok anyway. I just kept my pen moving and the ride was over before I had time to overwork it. I considered adding some colored pencil when I got home, but decided to just leave it alone.

14 replies on “Sleeping Subway Cyclist”
such lovely raggedy lines – what good use of your travel time – does it make it seem shorter? or longer? maybe. And the off-white paper suits very well too.
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nice loose lines and you’ve captured it in such a short while too. i love this sketch.
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I love this!! I am glad you didn’t color it, it looks like it should be just the lines! I am amazed at how quickly you drew this!
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I love this and I’m amazed how quickly you got the results.
The way you did it – first movng the pen above the paper – reminds me of what i read in ‘The zen of drawing’ where the author recommends this proces.
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I am enjoying it.
Very quick your drawing is so nice.
And, I will also try. I think.
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HOW NEAT, Jana! I love your decription of the process and the fine contours you’ve done — loose — but with detailing that can identify this individual — BEAUTIFULLY DONE! SO FAST TOO!! I am so envious that you can do this!
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Good concept and excellent execution, Jana! I should do that more often!
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this is excellent. very free. i’m glad you didn’t add colour. i love a sketch with a bike in it somewhere.
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Excellent result!
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Oooh that’s lovely. How do you manage to get such detail with such loose lines? Brilliant.
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What marvelous linework. Really lovely.
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Very nice, so loose and free! I’m working now on taking time before starting and visualizing…it does make a difference!
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Stunning! I love it.
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This is beautiful Jana! Brave of you to do it on the train … The trains I’m on are usually to shaky!
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