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PV-Beach

Ink and watercolor in Canson 7×10 Watercolor Sketchbook
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I liked the Canson paper, it’s strong and very forgiving and heavily surface-sized — better than the Moleskine notebook — but not too thrilled with the colors I used in the sketch above in trying to use at least something the teacher suggested.

Puerto Vallarta Breakfast

Breakfast View – Ink and watercolor in small watercolor Moleskine
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Breakfast at the workshop was at the open air buffet restaurant in our hotel, right on the beach, which was a lovely way to start the day, even if it was only half an hour after sunrise.

While I was drawing this a waiter came over to watch. I asked if he painted and he said he loved to draw but was unable to buy decent paint locally and mail order was impossible because Mexico charges 3 times the cost of the supplies in tariffs. He told me he draws pictures and then his 4 year old son colors them with crayons. He looked so admiringly at my little painting kit, amazed at what could be had in the U.S. I asked the class if they’d be willing to donate some paints for him and the teacher gave me her entire palette full of paint and three brushes. Other students gave watercolor paper and blocks. He was so grateful and everyone was really happy to have been able to help a fellow aspiring artist. I still feel happy remembering his sweet smile.

Tonight I spent the evening tonight typing up my pages of notes from the workshop. Here is one of most important thing I learned, which should be obvious but never really clicked for me before:

FOCAL POINT

I am often entranced by all the details in a subject and my paintings can suffer from lack of focal point or strong values. Forcing myself to chose a focal point BEFORE starting a sketch or painting and concentrating on values in that area at least, is going to make a huge difference in my approach and to the success of the painting.

  • A juror or curator for a show looks at each slide no more than 3 seconds and MUST BE ABLE TO SEE THE FOCAL POINT IMMEDIATELY. There should be the most contrast in that area (dark/light contrast or strong color contrast).
  • Before starting a drawing or painting, think about what interests you and attracts you to the subject and determine the focal point.
  • Put a painting in progress on the mantle and walk by it in the evening as the room gets dark to see if the focus is apparent
  • Hold the painting up to a mirror 10 feet away to look for problems with the drawing or painting, especially in portraits
  • Get the values right: Make a “Claude” mirror by spray-painting black the back of a sheet of plexiglass. It will reflect the image in values with the color neutralized. Or view the painting through red or gray film to show values without color.
  • She recommends as the best book on design in painting: “Probing the Hidden Order” by Marie McDonald Roberts.
  • Best spot in a painting for focal point is above horizon to the right because we read from right and up (this is the same spot as the “Divine Proportion” or “Golden Mean.”
  • To study focal points, very quickly go through a magazine putting red dots on the first thing you notice, then go back and study why your eyes went there. Usually contrast in value or color.

Next time I’ll post what I learned about Color Chords.

18 replies on “Focus!”

hi there, actually i really like the colors of the top drawing. that´s what i noticed first. love bright colors and the red of the umbrella contrast well with the background. i like it.

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Wow Jana, this is almost as good as taking the workshop. I wake up to these great views of Mexico – and they convey the atmosphere beautifully – and then learn something important from your notes. Thanks so much! I really love the story about the Mexican waiter as well – thank you for doing that and telling us about it.

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Thank you for sharing! The Golden Mean…ah I remember!!! I am looking forward to learning more from you! You sketches are lovely. I have just started again (after a long abcence) to sketch/paint, with watercolor being my favorite. I too forget sometimes about the focal point and when happenstance produces a good painting it’s obvious that there is a good focal point.
I’ve only attended one workshop years ago but it was so much fun…a gathering in the morning then we’d all head outdoors for the day followed by another c&c session after dinner. Was fun!

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Eating outside right on the beach is one of the best parts of being in Mexico! I have to admit that my ears go back whenever I hear instructors talk about focal points and how every painting has to have one. Yes, they work to organize a painting, but it’s not the only way to organize a painting. It’s kind of like saying all songs need a catchy hook. I think it’s more interesting to think about directing the viewer’s gaze around the painting, which is a more holistic way of thinking about how contrast/color/shape attract our attention. I do agree that it’s really useful to look at other pictures and spend some time analyzing how the composition is working (or not).

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Jana, this is a terrific post so full of information..things we need to hear more than five times at least. Thank you so much for this mini-workshop.

And, I love this painting!

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Yay! What great information to have! Thank you so much for sharing, and I look forward to your post about Color Chords.
The story about the artist waiter was very touching. It really never occurred to me that art supplies were such a luxury. I’ll be more grateful in the future!

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Great post Jana,

Firstly, what a lovely gesture with the waiter. I really like your Breakfast View – it is very ‘you’! Nice colour as always.

The Focal Point information is really useful. And, I feel very impressed that (without any training) I actually do a couple of these things already! Thank you!

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Hi Jana, welcome back! Thanks for sharing the info you picked up during your vacation/classes. I was really moved by your story about helping the waiter! Good for you guys, and good for him- now I hope he doesn’t cherish the gift so much that he never uses any of the supplies!

Your sketches from the trip are so fresh and airy- and those fountains! Wow! They’re so spicey and gloriously saturated, they just scream Mexico. Lovely! Hope you’re settling in ok, and thanks again for posting your notes 🙂

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Hello Jana, I’m loving the latest work and the colorful stories. I am very touched about the waiter and the generosity of the class. The tips on the focal point and the “Claude board” is very interesting.

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Jana, I LOVE these sketches, they are cool and breezy and bright and capture the warm climate perfectly (as I shiver in an ice storm in CT)
Sandy

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I’m so excited you’re back so we can learn vicariously through your trip. What a sweet thing your class did for the aspiring painter. I am eager to try some of the tips, like the reflection and claude board.

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Andrea and Melissa said what I thought. When I was a little ‘un we used to view pictures through red cellophane;we called it “shadowing.”But the black plexiglass is new to me.Thankyou, Jana, for generously sharing.

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Kris, I totally agree with you about taking a more holistic approach and directing the viewer’s eye and I loved your saying it makes your “ears go back” –what a great image! But a focal point is a good place to start for me, especially with landscapes or when I draw in ink since I often end up with the thing that really interested me not fitting onto the page, or giving ever item on the canvas equal emphasis or worse, the wrong things have the greatest contrast so the viewer misses the thing I most want them to notice. I know it’s also a very “watercolor” concept. I’m beginning to observe that there may be a difference between what watercolor workshop teachers teach about making watercolor paintings and what makes fine art. There’s a whole other world out there of watercolor competitions and associations and workshop circuits that are all about technique and making nice representational art with one gimick or another. It’s started turning me off (or making my ears turn back) but still, there are good points to be gained from it that I think will help my paintings.

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beaches are really tricky to judge due to extreme brightness and contrast. easier to work early morning or early evening (applies to photography too).
thanks for your kind comments by the way.

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